A pert casino waitress accidentally tripled in stature by a scientist achieves her dream of Vegas stardom and falls in love wuth him, but sacrifices her size to save him when he’s kidnapped by a mobster. .,

by Vincent Penpusher · 126 pts 916 views

Stand Tall!

5 reviews

FFF Mentor · 7,850 pts ★ Accepted

Hello,
I see a lack of logic in the logline: [sacrifice her size to save his lover from the mob].

I like the idea of a giant woman starring in Las Vegas.

Vincent Penpusher · 126 pts

See the screenplay ar http://filmfreeway.com/projects/476988

dpg Singularity · 112,231 pts

Well, the comedic potential and logic of the premise aside, the logline gives away the 3rd Ac: ?what she must ultimately do for the man she loves. ? A logline should never show that card, ?should never reveal what happens in the 3rd Act to resolve the dramatic conflict. ?Should never tip its hand about anything in the 3rd Act.