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Yes, it isn't clear. I have changed it.
Thanks. I didn't know there was a reply button so I sent you an email. Sorry about that.
Michael
I am not sure who the two who like each other is, is it the couple whose painting is stolen, or are one of the characters from the original couple and one of the characters from the 'bad couple' friends and this incident causes trouble between them?
The wording is just a little unclear but the overall idea does get through.
So more along the lines of a minor tweak to the logline, not a major overhaul.