A group of rebels fed up with pop culture decide to form a band to rebel against society with music, little did they know they would become one of the most controversial bands of all time.

The band

4 reviews

L.D. 0 pts

I can see the fun in this one. I think using the word "rebel" twice detracts from the logline.

NewGrimmCity 0 pts

It might be better to start "Fed up with pop culture, a group of rebels..." I think it frames things better.

Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai · 1,742 pts

It's unclear who your protagonist is or what their goal will be. This logline boils down to "a band becomes famous." What sets this apart from a dozen other films like that?