A behind the scenes look at a talk show for women that men secretly love to watch.

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jlmarevalo Logliner · 314 pts

Yes it does thanks. I figured it as such and trying to rewrite it in a better...

Neer Shelter Singularity · 55,464 pts

This is may be a tag line but not a logline.
The fundamental purpose of a logline is to describe a plot which means it needs at bare minimum to include a main character, an inciting incident and an outer goal with a causal connection.

The next draft should include these elements in order to receive constructive feedback about the logline and concept.

Hope this helps.