2 reviews
Actually, It's more like The Brady Bunch meets Diff'rent Strokes.
Interesting start, but what’s the conflict here? What does the protagonist want and who is trying to prevent him from getting it? Make it more explicit.
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Actually, It's more like The Brady Bunch meets Diff'rent Strokes.
Interesting start, but what’s the conflict here? What does the protagonist want and who is trying to prevent him from getting it? Make it more explicit.