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A anxious man must decrypt a disturbing, mysterious recurring dream that may hold the secret to preventing the end of the world.
Consider the following: 1. Why him? Who is this anxious protag that can save the world? 2. Why now - the dreams? 3. What is the recurring dream? E.g., death of the world via body snatchers, alien invasion – you get the idea. Elaborate on this to orientate the reader. 4. Think about your baddie's goaRead more
Consider the following:
1. Why him? Who is this anxious protag that can save the world?
2. Why now – the dreams?
3. What is the recurring dream? E.g., death of the world via body snatchers, alien invasion – you get the idea. Elaborate on this to orientate the reader.
4. Think about your baddie’s goal it may strengthen your logline E.g., revenge for the Roswell incident or like in Independence Day – planet harvesters.
Hope you find this constructive, keep going!
See lessFear of monetary demise turns the globe into a top-security prison; Buddha senses implosion; looms with a pragmatic paragon to unzip recession and stress from deceptive human life; enlightens three lost children who endure from NASA plane crash in Vedic woods.
Interesting premise, consider the following: 1. I struggle with your major event - the fifth Buddha’s return / following these three youngsters. 2. Your world is great, but who is your baddie? 3. Concerning the three youngsters, is the fifth Buddha reborn through one of them? Example: “In a collapsiRead more
Interesting premise, consider the following:
1. I struggle with your major event – the fifth Buddha’s return / following these three youngsters.
2. Your world is great, but who is your baddie?
3. Concerning the three youngsters, is the fifth Buddha reborn through one of them?
Example:
“In a collapsing global police state, a reincarnate fifth Buddha sets out to restore nirvana to the world”
I only have a basic understanding of Buddhism – maybe use my thoughts/questions as a good example of your typical reader.
Keep going, take care.
See lessA researcher stumbles upon a group of young children, who can communicate without being connected, but he’s shocked to discover that the children wish to eradicate their elders–and particularly the researcher.
Consider the following: 1. What is your protag’s field of research? 2. “communicate without being connected” – telepathic? 3. What is an elder - their parents? 4. Why do these children want to snuff him out? To keep their secret of world domination - what is their goal? Keep going! BTW: Checkout 199Read more
Consider the following:
1. What is your protag’s field of research?
2. “communicate without being connected” – telepathic?
3. What is an elder – their parents?
4. Why do these children want to snuff him out? To keep their secret of world domination – what is their goal?
Keep going!
BTW: Checkout 1995’s “Village of the Dammed” and the 81 classic “Scanners” for some fun research.
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