wickedink

Penpusher · 271 points

29 points to Logliner

on When a senior Barrister?s reputation is threatened by Alzheimer’s disease, he must enlist his estranged Barrister son, to secretly help him conduct a murder trial.

I agree. This is an interesting idea. I like it a lot. As Richiev and dpg suggested, perhaps the son could be the protagonist. It also addresses the points raised by Nir Shelter ?about ?the premise and 'what's the point?'…
on A Estranged Father is kidnapped by his business partner in NYC, He must escape to reconcile with his kids or die regarding in a small old apartment. ★ Accepted

I just have some questions and food for thought, not necessarily to include?in the logline but about the plot which may inform the reworking of the logline... * I wouldn't have the word 'estranged' as the second word or as…
on When a shy teenager finds herself torn between her life-long best friend and a potential new love, she discovers one of them is a projection of her mental illness.

Hi, Why is the teen torn?between the two? Is her life-long friendship threatened by the potential boyfriend? ?Will she lose one if she chooses the other and why?