tosbro84

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on When a nerdy guy, who no one would like to date, is pranked , he creates using AI and robotics the hottest girl ever existed in the universe and programs it to date him , surprising and shocking everyone.

superb..I am struggling to find a believable and relatable conflict in the story.
on When a nerdy guy, who no one would like to date, is pranked , he creates using AI and robotics the hottest girl ever existed in the universe and programs it to date him , surprising and shocking everyone.

Thank You for the feedback. I am figuring out the possibilities will share the updates.
on When she gets the approval for making her first film on the script she has stolen or adapted from the pages of a shredded diary from a dilapidated library, she finds out that whoever from the cast and crew finishes reading it dies mysteriously in the same manner as in the script and diary. The script is already circulated online to all and whoever reads the first line could not put it down until finishes it.

I have a to do idea but I am not too sure about it. Working on it.
on When the family of S Brothers, who have made their fortune by making B- Grade horror movies, shifts to a palatial mansion, the family members starts getting disappearing mysteriously by the evil characters created by them in their movies, the to-be daughter-in-law has to bring them back before it is too late.

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on An unemployable man, 40, starts killing people to vacate positions for himself only to get hired by an agency to assassinate people.

Thanks for the feedback, here is the full concept of what I have in the mind An unemployable man, 40, starts killing people to vacate positions for himself only to get hired by an agency to assassinate people. After getting…
on An unemployable man, 40, starts killing people to vacate positions for himself only to get hired by an agency to assassinate people.

Please find the logline. Waiting for the feedbacks, Thanks