Niksa

Penpusher · 28 points

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on A retired hitman seeks revenge on his former boss’s son for killing the dog his dead wife gave him.

Okay, this is a John Wick Plot or whatever you wanna call it. This is NOT a logline.
on Homewardsbounsville Chronicles: (Sci-Fi/Sitcom): A con man created as a scientific experiment must return to futuristic School for the Strange, that created him before he destroys modern day St Louis, and in turn himself.

Not a bad plot but I would remove the "and in turn himself." part. It makes no sense.
on A violent gangster turns vigilante when his young son is murdered, but when he executes an undercover cop, his operation backfires.

Just change the ending, maybe you can write the entire logline in some similar form.
on When a headstrong 20-year-old joins a dangerous separatist group, his father, an SFPD cop, must go to a remote Pacific island to rescue him so they can rebuild their failed relationship.

Not a bad plot idea.