Erik

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on Tired of losing and hearing his organization bashed on sports talk radio, the owner of a pro hockey team hires the local station’s most vocal caller to run the team.

No, the caller-turned-GM is the lead character. I guess the logline should focus on him?
on There is a company that can reset your life. If you don't feel like you have succeed in life you can just reset your life.

I immediately thought of two stories: Eternal Sunshine and Groundhog Day. Include enough information to distinguish your story from the others that it might slightly resemble.
on With an entire school held captive, a doctor must relive a traumatic childhood that may solve the mystery behind the sadistic madman that threatens his daughter's life.

Intriguing, but it would probably hook me more if I got a small hint about how the doctor, his childhood and the madman are connected. This implies that they are, but it's very vague. Try to give away enough to…