KeynoJones

Penpusher · 102 points

198 points to Logliner

5 loglines
3 reviews

When a self proclaimed DJ chases after power and notoriety, with the help of her best friend and mentor, she must try to keep her thrown in tact from the enviousness of another DJ even if that means going beyond her moral beliefs.

August 17, 2020
When a devoted ex criminal desired to start a righteous past completes her prison term, she is dragged back into the criminal underworld after her son is kidnapped by her ex crime mob boss and forced to complete numerous tasks, before he ends up dead.

February 4, 2020
Once an insecure sexy convict starts dating a professional boxer, that gives her the world and change her for the better she never expected. A childhood friend tracks her down in order to confess love for her, and she is left with a torn decision choosing between a long time friend and the man of her dreams. Les Be Honest Don’t know if better, I’ll keep trying. However, seems a bit generic aye? not interesting enough i think.

February 4, 2020
After feeling doubtful of finding love again, a sexy ex convict finds interests in a pro boxer who returns the same feelings, but their love is intercepted when her ex best friend, who’s a former investigator responsible for taking her in the first place, seeks out to find her and confess her feelings before it’s too late. possible title: “Les Be Honest”

February 3, 2020
When she discovers her vengeful ex crime boss has recruited her son to commit towards she and her formers lover’s debts. And ex convict released from prison seeks out to save him, only to be dragged into a world she vowed to leave forever.

January 23, 2020

on When a self proclaimed DJ chases after power and notoriety, with the help of her best friend and mentor, she must try to keep her thrown in tact from the enviousness of another DJ even if that means going beyond her moral beliefs.

Thanks, you are right!!! That be the HARDEST is keeping it short but descriptive with the challenge involved the character has to face. Something I'll definitely take in consideration, thank you.
on When a self proclaimed DJ chases after power and notoriety, with the help of her best friend and mentor, she must try to keep her thrown in tact from the enviousness of another DJ even if that means going beyond her moral beliefs.

I honestly used a poor word choice on that matter, I should have put something like a "confident but arrogant DJ" a better adjective would had suffice since self proclaimed is referencing self, so you're right!! And thrown in tact…
on A daughter and a father sits at a table. From chewing with her mouth open, to bad table manners to taking drugs right in front of him, the father does not realise anything because he is distracted by his phone.

Not really a logline, more like an explanation, which is two totally different things. You first of all need to give a description of the father, to me he seem like a careless kind of guy if he doesn't see…