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on A man trying to leave the gang-life is being hunted after his boss discovers he unknowingly introduced an undercover cop into the gang.

He wants to escape the lifestyle he's in..and he's close to being able to do that....Then the undercover cop is discovered and the gang leader begins to go after him.... His life, the undercover cops life and our hero's girlfriends…
on A man trying to leave the gang-life is being hunted after his boss discovers he unknowingly introduced an undercover cop into the gang.

I guess i would have to say - the discovery of the cop is a plot point...As im still learning how to write a screenplay, im unsure if it is the inciting incident or plot point 1...
on Trying to clear a debt, a sport gambling lawyer has three days to locate what is believed to be a non-existent object while avoiding a watchful detective.

ugh, no thats not right....perhaps its not important for the logline what kind of things hes gambling on...
on Trying to clear a debt, a sport gambling lawyer has three days to locate what is believed to be a non-existent object while avoiding a watchful detective.

maybe it should be " "...a gambling sports-lawyer..." or is that just as confusing?