Hughscann

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on [Logline Omitted]

"Sleep Monsters" threw me though. Definitely would give a dufferent title some thought.
on [Logline Omitted]

I like it. To be honest i don't know how, but it may benefit by playing with to economise wording somehow, to reduce it to maybe three lines. This does sound pedantic but something tells me it may be worth…
on When a doctor is framed and wrongly convicted of killing his wife, he must escape his so called "justice" and find the true killer, the mysterious one-armed man, in order to clear his name.

Evokes the tension but could be more economical. You could delete "his so called justice", "true killer" - gives away part if the plot, and "in irder to clear his name as it is both redundant, and gives away plot…
on A who woman seeks help is murdered. Driven by a sense of moral obligation Kaameleon breaks a promise and returns to prison. Beaten, starved, terrorized and humiliated. Can he survive the sadistic guard targeting him to find what happened to five missing inmates? Kaameleon?s personality is the driving force keeping his people working to insure his survival.

I concur with CraigBerger. Although my sense of an effective logline is to be able to introduce the nain protagonist and what's at stake in one or two lines.