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When a Newly recruited police officer discovers that his younger sister is a serial killer, he does everything to keep anyone from finding out.

December 13, 2012

on While out on a date – a young; confident; and carefree girl comes across the most addictive of aromas. She follows it like a drug only to be lead to a dead body. Now her morals are at war with her new found obsession – She's addicted to the smell of death.

Jim isn't your version like a teaser? just the last part of it because your stating a question the log line is meant to tell the whole in a few lines not leave us with guesses.
on After she is imbued with the power to kill with a touch, a grieving farmer must stop a trio of fundamentalists intent on recruiting her as the fourth "horseperson" of the apocalypse before they can end life on Earth.

I really like this idea but what is the drive to save the world? because she is grieving, not sure about that.
on Marple Lane is a mystery adventure set in a house owned by a recently deceased famous crime author and follows Margaret, a reclusive widow who, when she starts receiving letters addressed to the main character of the author’s novel, must help a desperate fan solve the mystery of her family’s disappearance before those responsible stop her.

I assume that "Marple Lane" is the title, you don't need that in a log line, you should start introducing the main character right away. E.g. if it were the main character was the Author, A Famous Crime Author Follows…