gsfields2004

Penpusher · 86 points

214 points to Logliner

on When society devolves into chaos after the electric grid collapses, an immoral celebrity survivalist leads a group of defrauded fans to defend his remote compound from a ruthless gang of killers who are out to kill him and his family.

Thanks. ?I had played around with the road option, but it felt too much like the Walking Dead...only without the zombies. Just finished the first draft and it?s very close to what you?ve described. ?Protagonist hunkers down at his private…
on An ambitious app developer must work at his late father?s winery before he can inherit it and cash out for the money he needs to stop a megalomaniac venture capitalist from stealing his latest app.

Oops, I copied and pasted too much in the logline.? Admin...I would appreciate it if you could strip away the part starting with Protagonist to the end.? Thanks. Logline:? A money hungry app developer must work at his late father?s…
on When society devolves into chaos after the electric grid collapses, an immoral celebrity survivalist leads a group of defrauded fans to defend his remote compound from a ruthless gang of killers who are out to kill him and his family.

Thanks again for the many helpful suggestions.? This is the logline I came up with that is more concise while still hitting many of the points made. "An immoral star of a survival TV show must lead a group of…