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• on A desperate CEO’s legally ambiguous plans to save his company are undermined when he is blackmailed by a mysterious ex-employee.

  I wanted to comment because I really like this logline and the sense of the tension in this movie. I can see the others' comments are phenomenal. My two cents is that CEOs can range from multi-billion dollar corporations to…

• on A man encounters a violent, time-traveling version of himself from 10 years in the future and the dangerous group of people determined to bring them both down.

  This sounds like a mind-bending action flick. It would be cool if the logline made it clearer as to who is "A man" to give a a sense of his background, skills, flaws, or conflicts when he meets his violent,…

• on An international smuggling maverick risks everything on an project that could catapult him into the big leagues, if his competition doesn't catch up with him first..

  Thanks. Yes I wish I could edit out the typos. Didn't realize that revisions were impossible until it was too late. That won't happen again. Overall good criticism while indicating a good understanding of the tone or type of story…

• on Guy Foster (codename: RAZORMOOSE) is framed for a tourist massacre by the syndicate of sin hunting his telepathic antlers. Fleeing John Law, Guy must clear his name.

  I love this concept. First capitalize Syndicate of Sin as it is a proper noun. I'm guessing Guy's superpower is his antlers, just because you said it's like a comic origin story. "Hunting" threw me off because their's references to…