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Penpusher · 51 points

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In a future where attention is the new currency, an introverted high school junior struggles to maintain a low profile when the release of a slandered film prompts violent plans from his socially ostracized peers.

October 14, 2019

on A desperate father decides not to rob a bank after receiving a loving call from his wife, but a corrupt cop blackmails him to proceed or face arrest for the stolen car and intent to commit a felony. (36) – For a short 6 minute screenplay

Does it have to be this short for a competition or entry to a festival? Consider making this longer.
on A high school dance challenges, socially awkward teen, to ask is jealous best friend for dancing lessons, after being asked out by the most popular girl in school.

This sounds like a good Coming-of-Age Drama/Comedy, but like others said before me, make sure it is grammatically perfect. I wasn't even sure the best friend was secretly in love with the MC until I read it from one of…