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It was love at first sight for two outgoing romantics. Years later, a chance encounter while on family vacations forces the unrequited soul mates to face the same decision: Continue their comfortable but unfulfilling lives or risk everything for a chance at complete happiness?
Thanks for the links to "Before" trilogy descriptions. I think (like dpg also mentioned) that there are parallels. At least (just judging by the descriptions) the first two. I haven't seen these movies (clearly I need to, in fact the…
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It was love at first sight for two outgoing romantics. Years later, a chance encounter while on family vacations forces the unrequited soul mates to face the same decision: Continue their comfortable but unfulfilling lives or risk everything for a chance at complete happiness?
The protagonists are the two unrequited, outgoing romantics. The goal is happiness/fulfillment, but that requires breaking away from their existing (comfortable, but unfulfilling) lives (ending their marriages, hurting their families, etc... <- I guess those would be the stakes as…
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It?s unexpected "love at first sight" for two outgoing romantics, but despite their mutually acknowledged connection the two unrequited soul mates stand by their current plans and relationships, living the ups and downs of their separate lives, challenged by what might have been, and what, years later, just might be.
dpg: Thanks so much for the feedback. After reading your comments (and a bit of sulking) I realized that you were right, I had a very vague log line. It was because I was trying to cover way too much…
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It?s unexpected "love at first sight" for two outgoing romantics, but despite their mutually acknowledged connection the two unrequited soul mates stand by their current plans and relationships, living the ups and downs of their separate lives, challenged by what might have been, and what, years later, just might be.
dpg: Thanks so much for the feedback. After reading your comments (and a bit of sulking) I realized that you were right, I had a very vague log line. It was because I was trying to cover way too much…
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It?s unexpected "love at first sight" for two outgoing romantics, but despite their mutually acknowledged connection the two unrequited soul mates stand by their current plans and relationships, living the ups and downs of their separate lives, challenged by what might have been, and what, years later, just might be.
OK, I probably have too much of act one in the log line. The acts I'm planning are more like: 1) They meet, but decide the to choose 'safe'. 2) They realize that their 'safe' paths just aren't going to…
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A college student attempts to raise funds for his survival, by hosting a huge house party during the initial days of a zombie outbreak. But when local law enforcement busts the party, we learn they?re not just there for the noise complaints.
I'm not sure I get your premise. The college student is hosting a party during a zombie outbreak to make some money to survive the zombie outbreak? Also I would add a one or two word description of the protagonist…
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After falling victim to a humiliating prank by the high school Queen Bee, best friends and world-class geeks, Mindy and Jodi, decide to get their revenge by uniting the outcasts of the school against her and her circle of friends.
I'm fine with geek, but I think making them "world-class" shrinks the perceived challenge faced by the protagonists, making it seem like there's less conflict.
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Forced to stay at home following a heart attack, a high powered exec realizes he doesn’t know his teenage daughter when she announces she?s pregnant, prompting him to try and reconnect with her and stabilize the family.
Neat premise. I think that specifying that the holiday is to recuperate is redundant given that you include that it's a forced holiday and post heart attack. Here's my suggestions for the opening: During a forced holiday following a heart…
