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When an accused murderer claims that her friend time-travelled, a famous psychiatrist turned writer starts questioning his beliefs and rationality

November 21, 2012
Back in his small hometown, a famous psychiatrist turned writer has to challenge his beliefs and rationality while struggling with his past demons when he's asked to work with a patient and his long lost friend, Tracy who's charged with murder but claims that her friend time-traveled.

July 14, 2012

on Back in his small hometown, a famous psychiatrist turned writer has to challenge his beliefs and rationality while struggling with his past demons when he's asked to work with a patient and his long lost friend, Tracy who's charged with murder but claims that her friend time-traveled.

Ya looking at it now, I do agree that it's a mouthful. Will post a new logline today. Thanks for replying.
on Former high school Ms. Popular, Sophie, is now the mother of an autistic child. Her life's ambitions are now different and she is burdened by a misplaced sense of regret. Tonight she is on her way to her high school reunion to face her former classmates. The night turns out to be a difficult one, where her moral standards are challenged.

You have all the elements in here that are needed, and then some more. I think it will be best if you take out the lines "her's life's ambitions are now different...regret" and "night turns out to be difficult... are…
on 70,000 years ago a young female hunter is elected to lead her tribe out of Africa. Death, starvation, wild animals and other humans all stand between them and the arc of history.

Wow this has the power to be an epic film. And given the current trend, having a strong female protagonist is an add on. Currently your logline brings across the world of this story quite well. The challenge for you…
on An anime of what may have transpired in Hell while Jesus was there for 3 days.

Good interesting concept that can go several different directions. And to bring out the right story across you need four things in the logline. Who's the Protagonist, Who/What is the antagonist, How strong are the stakes and what is the…
on Since he was a kid, Jack grew up on hard boiled crime fiction. He always imagined himself to be the tough protagonist in those books. When he is thrown in one of those pulp fiction situations at the age of 29, with tough guys, big dough, feminine dynamite and exotic romps, his perceptions about his masculinity and toughness is about to change.

Firstly, I agree with Karel, this is an interesting concept- a chance to strip down the hard-boiled detective genre. (Of course that's not the route you have to take.) But the logline needs to be polished up. -Make sure that…