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Penpusher · 24 points

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After earning a work-for-trade job in a high-tech senior home, a self-absorbed grad student must manage his assigned resident’s social media profile. Only this account does more than just posts likes and retweets, it also keeps the resident alive.

January 1, 2021

on While on a routine mission, the angel of death awakens the wrath of the apocalypse and must travel through hell to find his redemption.

Semantics notwithstanding, it took me a couple reads before your logline began to make sense. For a cold reader who would inevitably read this script, this logline would need some punching up. The wording is a little tricky which could…
on When a competitive young man looses his chance to reach a famous mountain top against both bad weather as well as because of his total lack of cooperation with his team he ends up arrested when the second world war sets off during his trip and must learn to become a humble man to survive in a world totally different from anything he ever experienced before.

This might be me, but this reads as two loglines. Both possess a lot of information, one giving the time period and the latter describing the protagonist; yet both could be condensed into one. Especially for an epic like this…