Bilmore

Penpusher · 51 points

249 points to Logliner

on A Psy-Cop enters the mind of a killer on death row in an attempt to unlock a suppressed memory that may prove his innocence.

What is the goal? What is the obstacle? Sure, the cop wants to prove the man's innocence, but why? He was his best friend? He's the cop who sent him away? What prevents the cop from getting the info right…
on When the Mafia takes over a small town cemetery, an underachieving gravedigger must unearth their criminal activity or end up six feet under.

It's an intriguing logline and I want to know more, but overall it's a little vague upon examination. There is a ticking time bomb of sorts. He needs to solve the mystery before he ends up underground himself, but it's…