1. Posted: February 9, 2017In:

    When a dedicated zookeeper ends up in an unorthodox animal shelter, she becomes fascinated by the back-to-basics-lifestyle of her unsociable boss and his adolescent son.

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    And then what? ?What becomes her dramatic goal? ?What does her fascination propel?her to do? And who/what opposes her? And what are the stakes? ?What' the big deal about being "fascinated"? ?What existential difference will it make in?her life?Please check out the "formula" option at the top of theRead more

    And then what? ?What becomes her dramatic goal? ?What does her fascination propel?her to do?
    And who/what opposes her?
    And what are the stakes? ?What’ the big deal about being “fascinated”? ?What existential difference will it make in?her life?

    Please check out the “formula” option at the top of the web page for guidelines on how to formulate an industry standard logline.

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  2. Posted: February 8, 2017In:

    After a big heist, a problematic cop who spent years undercover in a gang, must come back to active when he finds out that the criminal that he’s always pursued is still loose.

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    As Richiev said. And as cops are always pursuing criminals on the lam, what makes this one stand out from all the other criminals in his case load? ?Why must he focus all his time and energy on this bad guy when there are so many others he could be pursuing?

    As Richiev said.

    And as cops are always pursuing criminals on the lam, what makes this one stand out from all the other criminals in his case load? ?Why must he focus all his time and energy on this bad guy when there are so many others he could be pursuing?

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  3. Posted: February 6, 2017In:

    When all traces of his existence are erased, and his wife and child with a man claiming to be him, a reporter must find out how and why he was deleted to recover his life and family.

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    >>When no one in the world has any knowledge of his existenceThe story of my life.?But enough about me. ?What's the downside for him? ?IOW: what are the stakes? ?In the age of Internet where you can run but you can't hide your identity, ?where privacy is more honored in the breach than the obsRead more

    >>When no one in the world has any knowledge of his existence

    The story of my life.?

    But enough about me. ?What’s the downside for him? ?IOW: what are the stakes? ?In the age of Internet where you can run but you can’t hide your identity, ?where privacy is more honored in the breach than the observance, wouldn’t a lot of people consider this to be a solution, not a problem?

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