When her criminal partner is murdered by her boss, a two-bit thief must infiltrate the ranks of his operation and take her revenge.

by svasta Penpusher · 30 pts 0 views

Tackles with grief and the passage of time.

Updated: When a two-bit thief’s criminal partner is murdered by her boss, she must infiltrate the ranks of his operation and take her revenge.

1 review

LachieM Penpusher · 29 pts

Hey Sam!

I'm sure you've got a clear idea of what this story will be, but the logline is a little vague. What line of business are they in? Who actually is the protagonist/how would you describe her? Why MUST she take revenge and not go to the authorities?

It sounds like a very promising idea that I'm sure you'll polish up very nicely!

- Lachie