When an aquaphobic janitor discovers he has the ability to control water, he must overcome his fear to save his fiance from a fire manipulating madman

Hey guys

what do you think of this one...

"When an timid janitor discovers he has the power to command water, he must find a mythical artifact to save his fiance from a fire manipulating madman"

to vague?

I'm agreeing with Heather. I'm not sure producers are imaginative enough to understand what you mean by "control water." Maybe you should say something specific about what he can do with water. Also, your title "Horn of the Leviathan" doesn't seem to give us any hints as to what the script is about, which you might want to consider.

Good point. To me his fear is more of having his head below water, everyday use is okay. I'll work on some more.
I'll play with it some more, his occupation doesn't work well with the logline
Cheers.