The world is about to be destroyed by none other than an ordinary human, and the only one who knows about it is an unwillingly chosen fish.

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Stardustfortheearthlings Penpusher · 21 pts

Thanks so much for the advice. I will make some changes to see if it works more. There is definitely and environmental message, do you think it comes across in the logline well/interestingly enough?

Philippe Le Miere Samurai · 558 pts

If this were my logline, I'd focus more on character 'Fish'. "unwillingly chosen" implies a character of meek traits - just as Nemo was also unwillingly chosen.
Theme feels to be embracing an environmental message: "Man unwittingly destroying earth/sea".

A quick sketch logline for Nemo may read: "When [an overly cautious clown fish], [discovers this son has been captured by deep sea divers], he must [save his son, and escape the dangers of a dentist's fish tank]

"Dentist's fish tank" maybe replaced with "ordinary human destruction" ...