Jinn returns home confident he can save his daughter but at the cost of his own sanity. [Short Film] [Fantasy] [Horror?]

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It would help if you added to your logline what your lead character needs to save his daughter from?

Is he saving her from drug addiction?

Is he saving her from a gang that terrorizes the neighborhood?

Is he saving her from a demonic doll?

Is he saving her from an abusive relationship?

Is he saving her from a rogue elf from a different dimension?

If you say the lead character needs to save his daughter, you should also add what he needs to save her from. Just a word or two.