Ex-Priest struggles against the Devil to prevent his just started B&B into a portal to Hell.

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Fandango1980 Logliner · 316 pts

Hey Foxtrot 25,

Thank you for you comment!
Can I use Bed & Breakfast in your line?

To give you a bit of a background on the story.
Its about a priest that doesn't believe anymore due to dramatic events and starts a new life by running a Bed and Breakfast
The first guests arrive and appears to be the devil and his lackeys who wants to turn his B&B into a portal from Hell and start an apocalypse

I hope to hear you soon!

Kind Regards,

Aschwin

Foxtrot25 Summitry · 17,380 pts

Fandango,

This is confusing. Try to assist your writing a bit so that the read flows better.

An ex-priest battles the Devil in order to prevent his newly formed ?????? into being used as a destructive portal from hell.