An ex-con stunt driver is retained by the FBI to drive a witness- the Godfather?s mother- cross country, dodging bullets, corrupt cops, and one very scorned lover.

Thank you, Jennifer. Very kind. Also very perceptive, as your last guess was spot-on. Although the motive is not terribly original, it does seem to work in the story.

It's completed, if interested in reading it; I'd be glad to forward. :)
Have a great logline-producing day!

I just love it.

How is he retained? Blackmailed? Coerced? Tricked? Promised a clean record?

Anyway it sounds like a really cool script.

Nice!!

Finally again, a road movie with excitement. Road movies are too often pure inner journeys without much happening. you promise us a great cinematic ride.

Perhaps it would be good to know what the ex-con's investment in the story is. What can he get out of it?

And what will be the characters' psychological journey? I'm hoping this is a dual journey - both characters learn something from spending time with each other against their will.

I want to see this.