After getting a stuffed yak as a birthday present, a young Tibetan girl discovers that it turns into a real one.

3 reviews

Philippe Le Miere Logliner · 558 pts

"When a shy Tibetan girl, discovers her stuffed yak birthday present is alive, she must ... protect him from being hurt ( by ... who? why?) "

By introducing a villain, potentially more tension is created, forming empathy for the lead, and imaginative adventure for the reader.

Brainstormed ideas:
- who gives the present?
- why are they giving it?
- is it magical, religious, ... science experiement?

IvyEight6 54 pts

1) She is from either Bhutan or Nepal.
2) She is shy.
3) She must protect him from being hurt.

Philippe Le Miere Logliner · 558 pts

Fantasy or Comedy? ... Made me laugh! :)

"a young Tibetan girl" = protagonist

"stuffed yak transforms into a real one" = inciting incident

What might be the main character's goal?

If we unpack Pinocchio, here we have a toy, transforming into a real one, but it is the story of the toy's misadventures. Or then there's 'Pygmalion and Galatea', a love story, where a sculpture transforms into a real, beautiful woman.

While 'Tibetan' has cultural stereotypes, such as the practice of Buddhism, another suggestion might be to additionally reflect on the psychology of the girl. A single adjective, such as shy, courage, or intelligent, could give a clue as to how she might react to the unfolding adventures before her.