Penpusher
Posted: 2013-01-13T03:10:17+10:00 In:

When a highly respectable real estate attorney stumbles on the bullet-ridden body of a client, he must investigate his own firm to uncover their involvement in the murder.

Almiiitey, Maine

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    4 Reviews

    1. Penpusher

      Thanks for your feedback. Here’s a revised logline.

      When a highly respectable real estate attorney stumbles on the bullet-ridden body of a client, he must investigate his own firm to save his reputation.

      Do you think this better explains why he does not call the police?

      Thanks again.

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    2. “…he must investigate his own firm to uncover their involvement in the murder.”

      Needs an ‘and/or’ – otherwise, there’s no “push” for the main character, he might as well just call the police.

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    3. Penpusher

      Thank you for your positive feedback.

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    4. This is a really good logline. The complexity of the protagonist’s situation is immediately present. Good job!

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