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psbanerjee
Posted: August 1, 20122012-08-01T03:38:15+10:00 2012-08-01T03:38:15+10:00In: Public

When a casual blog written by a housewife, Mrs. Jones, about her sexual adventures with her impotent husband goes viral and becomes a rage, Mr. Jones has to decide between self-respect and the money and instant stardom staring the couple.

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    1. 2012-08-01T03:42:52+10:00Added an answer on August 1, 2012 at 3:42 am

      Good one!

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    2. 2012-08-01T03:59:12+10:00Added an answer on August 1, 2012 at 3:59 am

      I think it’s a pretty funny concept- very timely and easily understood. It’s a bit wordy, and you have to make sure the spelling is correct (I assume you meant “starring”).

      “When a poverty-stricken housewife’s blog about sexy adventures with her impotent husband goes viral, she must decide between her self-respect and dignity, or instant fame and fortune.”

      You can ratchet up the irony- and conflict/comedy by highlighting her possibly being religious, or her assuming that the blog was anonymous, or having her husband be a very prestigious man in town, or something along those lines.

      Hope this helps!

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      2012-08-01T04:03:28+10:00Added an answer on August 1, 2012 at 4:03 am

      Thanks, makes sense! I did mean ‘staring’ though, that the money right in front of their eyes…

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    4. 2012-08-05T02:52:18+10:00Added an answer on August 5, 2012 at 2:52 am

      staring (at) the couple.

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    5. 2012-08-05T15:21:40+10:00Added an answer on August 5, 2012 at 3:21 pm

      is this a short film?
      Is the main goal of the movie a decison? Is there a journey involved? A discovery?

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