In the year 2040 the scientist of planet earth declared all humanity immortal. In 1965 Kane was 10 years old and started seeking enlightenment with his brother. When Kane turned 95 he died and became the first man saved by science. On this day of celebration the world order again takes the life blood of another planet so the human existence can live on. As Kane watches he swaps out the current record and replaces it with a proper classic to support the occasion.
The world order policy was implemented 3000 years ago today, the record player is 3095 years old, he sits and watches as they celebrate immortality by removing another plants core.
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I don’t understand even the basics of the logline or the explanation, so this needs a lot of work. With neologisms, they should be avoided in loglines as they have to be explained before they can be used casually. As this doesn’t tell me much about what “happens” in your story it is hard to give pointers.