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  1. Posted: January 17, 2018In: Thriller

    After he spoils a shipment of drugs, newly-wed Jim must pay back the value in full after the drug’s owners kidnap his brother-in-law.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on January 18, 2018 at 5:27 am

    Agreed, Your choice of words are interesting. Not uncommon to see writers toss in vague adjectives and strange writing styles. Newly wed. Brother in law. Pay back the value. Spoils a shipment of drugs. 26 words as is. Not super long, but if you scalple this, just think how much better it could readRead more

    Agreed,

    Your choice of words are interesting. Not uncommon to see writers toss in vague adjectives and strange writing styles.

    Newly wed. Brother in law. Pay back the value. Spoils a shipment of drugs.

    26 words as is. Not super long, but if you scalple this, just think how much better it could read or at least, you would have room to add more formula elements, such as a ticking time bomb, etc…

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  2. Posted: January 5, 2018In: Thriller

    When a Data Courier wakes up in a French hospital with no idea how he got there, he must finish his delivery that may prevent or start a war, only he can?t remember whose side he?s on.

    Valentin Samurai
    Added an answer on January 15, 2018 at 12:08 pm

    That sounds very much like Johnny Mmemonic, the film with Keanu Reeves based on a William Gibson story. Here is my attempt: In the near future, when a data courier storing messages in a cybernetic cranial implant suffers a car accident erasing part of his personality he must evade deadly pursuants sRead more

    That sounds very much like Johnny Mmemonic, the film with Keanu Reeves based on a William Gibson story.
    Here is my attempt:
    In the near future, when a data courier storing messages in a cybernetic cranial implant suffers a car accident erasing part of his personality he must evade deadly pursuants sent by two factions at war whilst trying to piece together which side he belonged to.

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  3. Posted: January 11, 2018In: Thriller

    After getting an unusual feedback in his survey, an editor in chief gets involved with the underground network of renegade AI

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    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on January 12, 2018 at 9:47 pm

    OT for a moment. This short reminded me of your story: https://youtu.be/24kRv1c0PiU

    OT for a moment.

    This short reminded me of your story:

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