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A mother finds solace in her dead kid’s unfinished comic book, only to discover it “leading” to his possible murder.
When a grieving mother discovers clues to her teenager's murder in his unfinished graphic novel, she....Well, what does she do about the discovery?? ?The setup is a good one, but the logline needs a follow through of the action that results from the discovery.
When a grieving mother discovers clues to her teenager’s murder in his unfinished graphic novel, she….
Well, what does she do about the discovery?? ?The setup is a good one, but the logline needs a follow through of the action that results from the discovery.
See lessAfter a well planned ambush on an armored truck carrying arms, a cop must find the people behind it before the weapons hit the streets.
Agreed with the above - this reads like a standard police procedural episode. Ultimately, it's about a guy doing his job but what you need is for it to be about a motivated guy doing something out of the ordinary. Could his brother or sister be involved in a gang and he knows that the weapons were tRead more
Agreed with the above – this reads like a standard police procedural episode. Ultimately, it’s about a guy doing his job but what you need is for it to be about a motivated guy doing something out of the ordinary. Could his brother or sister be involved in a gang and he knows that the weapons were taken by a rival gang?
See lessWhen an armed soldier takes a junior class hostage, two rookie teachers are forced to defend their class.
I like the logline and the story seems to be not only fresh, but also very interesting. I would just add another element at the end of your logline. Maybe urgency gives your concept another boost.
I like the logline and the story seems to be not only fresh, but also very interesting.
See lessI would just add another element at the end of your logline.
Maybe urgency gives your concept another boost.