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In order to defeat a plot to suppress technology that will save millions of lives, a surveillance expert must play a deadly game of cat-and-mouse with an evil multinational and the shadowy private intelligence agency that employs him.
Try writing it again without using clich?s. play a deadly game of cat-and-mouse =?clich? an evil multinational?=? multinational what? also clich? the shadowy private intelligence agency = clich? Good goal, but what are the personal stakes?
Try writing it again without using clich?s.
play a deadly game of cat-and-mouse =?clich?
an evil multinational?=? multinational what? also clich?
the shadowy private intelligence agency = clich?
Good goal, but what are the personal stakes?
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So her parents were murdered by hunters who were pissed at them about something and who now want to hurt her and her friends as well?
So her parents were murdered by hunters who were pissed at them about something and who now want to hurt her and her friends as well?
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My initial thought was "that's hilarious". Because I can't take it seriously if the ghost first has a pleasant evening of sex and THEN starts getting vengeful. Your set up is whacky in the kind of way that comedies can get away with, but not thrillers.
My initial thought was “that’s hilarious”. Because I can’t take it seriously if the ghost first has a pleasant evening of sex and THEN starts getting vengeful. Your set up is whacky in the kind of way that comedies can get away with, but not thrillers.
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