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  1. Posted: June 24, 2018In: Thriller

    The Project

    TullyArcher Samurai
    Added an answer on June 28, 2018 at 2:02 am

    No protagonist, and also, they do all that FOR A CLASS PROJECT? Are they crapping money? And what kind of trap? What is at stake? What do they need to do? You're missing MOST of the components of a logline.

    No protagonist, and also, they do all that FOR A CLASS PROJECT? Are they crapping money? And what kind of trap? What is at stake? What do they need to do? You’re missing MOST of the components of a logline.

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  2. Posted: June 23, 2018In: Thriller

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    variable Uberwriter
    Added an answer on June 23, 2018 at 5:00 pm

    Reading IMDB loglines for known films helped me to begin with the process of "what's this film about?" https://loglines.org/?sort=vote is great to hang out and read reviews on all the cool loglines posted here Post your very own logline and get instant reviews from our top-notch film analysts. KeepRead more

    Reading IMDB loglines for known films helped me to begin with the process of “what’s this film about?”

    https://loglines.org/?sort=vote is great to hang out and read reviews on all the cool loglines posted here

    Post your very own logline and get instant reviews from our top-notch film analysts. Keep bothering them ???? it’s a great place to be

    You did right by posting it under “Thriller”. That’s precisely the nature of learning I continue to recieve from here. Good Luck!!

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  3. Posted: June 20, 2018In: Thriller

    When a mobbed-up madam sends a prostitute up to the estate of a sadistic, reclusive billionaire, it sets off a chain reaction that has her and those in her organized crime circle running for their lives.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on June 20, 2018 at 9:32 pm

    Agree with the others. "Sets of a chain reaction" is too vague. Sending the prostitute to the house sets up the inciting incident, but doesn't seem to be the inciting incident.? And there is no clear objective goal.? In fact, it's not clear to me who the protagonist is, the madam, the prostitute, orRead more

    Agree with the others. “Sets of a chain reaction” is too vague. Sending the prostitute to the house sets up the inciting incident, but doesn’t seem to be the inciting incident.? And there is no clear objective goal.? In fact, it’s not clear to me who the protagonist is, the madam, the prostitute, or….?

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