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A discredited private investigator has a chance at redemption after the missing dead body of his enemies child who happens to be his former boss.
The sentence is a bit complicated and incomplete, missing a verb,? so I'm not sure what the story is about.? I'm guessing what you meant to say was something like "after the body of his enemy's child is found..." -- that is the inciting incident. In any event, what are the stakes?? He's already on tRead more
The sentence is a bit complicated and incomplete, missing a verb,? so I’m not sure what the story is about.? I’m guessing what you meant to say was something like “after the body of his enemy’s child is found…” — that is the inciting incident.
In any event, what are the stakes?? He’s already on the outs with his former boss.? What more does he stand to lose if he doesn’t solve the murder?? ?Is the ex-boss out to kill him?? And what does he stand to gain by solving the murder?? In other words, what does redemption mean concretely?? Does he get his job back?? Does he regain favor with his former boss?? Is his life no longer in mortal danger?
See lessAn entire town wakes up with dissociative amnesia and is told to be a part of a voluntary social experiment; when one member of the town begins to suspect they are being held against their will, he launches a secret investigation to rediscover his past.
What will rediscovering his past accomplish?? IOW:? what is his objective goal in terms of changing his present situation?
What will rediscovering his past accomplish?? IOW:? what is his objective goal in terms of changing his present situation?
See lessA successful, married spends a night with a woman during a business trip, only to wake up mugged, a few days later the woman is a candidate in a job interview conducted by him and his wife.
>>We later learn that the wife and the woman are working together. She needed to prove that his husband is unfaithful Well, she's proved that in the 1st act.? Now what?? What's the plot that follows from that setup?? And who is in the driver seat of the plot, the scheming wife or the duped husRead more
>>We later learn that the wife and the woman are working together. She needed to prove that his husband is unfaithful
Well, she’s proved that in the 1st act.? Now what?? What’s the plot that follows from that setup?? And who is in the driver seat of the plot, the scheming wife or the duped husband?
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