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When a cynical woman and idealistic man find themselves on a sinking boat far out to sea, they must find a way to work together to survive until help arrives.
>> "find themselves on a sinking boat" Only "find themselves"? Something happened that forced them to make a conscious choice, an intentional effort take to a lifeboat to survive. What happened? And why wouldn't two people trapped on a boat work together to stay alive?? How believable that twoRead more
>> “find themselves on a sinking boat”
Only “find themselves”? Something happened that forced them to make a conscious choice, an intentional effort take to a lifeboat to survive. What happened?
And why wouldn’t two people trapped on a boat work together to stay alive?? How believable that two such people would choose to die rather than work together??? Yes, the polarity may be the source of some lively arguments over the meaning of life, politics, art — whatever, but I don’t see how that in any way threatens their chances of survival.? The character traits defined seem incommensurate to the situation.
See lessA retired rock star visits an imprisoned ex band-mate for the first time in 10 years, to reveal a life-changing secret. The two?of?them recall their bands early days as teenagers, its successes/problems as a satanic themed heavy metal group and its eventual downfall.
As mikepedley85 said. What's the source of tension?? What's the dramatic problem that MUST be solved? What is the retired rock star's objective goal?? And what are the stakes-- why should we in the audience care what happens (or not)?
As mikepedley85 said.
What’s the source of tension?? What’s the dramatic problem that MUST be solved? What is the retired rock star’s objective goal?? And what are the stakes– why should we in the audience care what happens (or not)?
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I like the sound of this, but I was wondering if you could increase the stakes if the cleric has to try and rescue others as well? (Otherwise, he/she comes off a bit selfish imo!)
I like the sound of this, but I was wondering if you could increase the stakes if the cleric has to try and rescue others as well? (Otherwise, he/she comes off a bit selfish imo!)
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