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A guilt-ridden psychiatrist delves into the occult to save his family when the evil spirit of a patient who killed himself haunts them.
My first impression was that I liked it, but you needed to be more specific with what this "delving" entails.? I think all you need to do is replace it with something more concrete, like unlocking the secret to an occult ritual. "When a guilt-ridden psychiatrist's family is threatened by the spiritRead more
My first impression was that I liked it, but you needed to be more specific with what this “delving” entails.? I think all you need to do is replace it with something more concrete, like unlocking the secret to an occult ritual.
“When a guilt-ridden psychiatrist’s family is threatened by the spirit of a former patient that killed himself, he must unlock the secret to an occult ritual to save them.”
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See lessWhen her mother dies suddenly and tragically, a distraught daughter must contend with her spiralling grief; but when the cult she has sought support from begins to take over her life, he must she must free herself and her family from their grip before they fall victim to a violent sacrificial ritual.
Deconstructing the logline, I get: Inciting incident = mother dies suddenly & tragically protagonist = distraught daughter suffering grief antagonist = cult of violent sacrificial ritual. A mother dying suddenly has a wonderful fairytale quality to it (although genre is Thriller). In my view, GrRead more
Deconstructing the logline, I get:
Inciting incident = mother dies suddenly & tragically
protagonist = distraught daughter suffering grief
antagonist = cult of violent sacrificial ritual.
A mother dying suddenly has a wonderful fairytale quality to it (although genre is Thriller). In my view, Grief is not a character trait – it’s an emotion, felt by said character. An example of a character trait might be Withdrawn – which is then the outcome of grief and sadness.
Think how the logline might personify the villain? Currently the cult feels very anonymous, vague, difficult to imagine.
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