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A cold and withdrawn assassin, who uses her apocalyptic visions of the future to hunt targets in the present before they become a threat, finds herself hunted by a deadly, yet emotionally unstable, foe, and, in her bid to survive, she uncovers a future she never could have foreseen.
The lack of plot specific details and abundance of words make this logline for a difficult read. Perhaps try re drafting the logline and include only the main character description of her character flaw, her inciting incident and goal. Then if there is room to spare add in additional information. HoRead more
The lack of plot specific details and abundance of words make this logline for a difficult read.
Perhaps try re drafting the logline and include only the main character description of her character flaw, her inciting incident and goal.
Then if there is room to spare add in additional information.
Hope this helps.
See lessWhen a na?ve woman meets a stalker online she must fight him off in order to return to her peaceful life.
Hello, I suggest you to include more details to build a stronger interest in the story. -What kind of actions she performs to fight the stalker? (going to the police :) ? -What kind of online stalking can be filmed in a visual way in the movie? Watch "unfriended", a whole movie on a computer screenRead more
Hello,
I suggest you to include more details to build a stronger interest in the story.
See less-What kind of actions she performs to fight the stalker? (going to the police 🙂 ?
-What kind of online stalking can be filmed in a visual way in the movie? Watch “unfriended”, a whole movie on a computer screen (very good), where some friends are ‘trolled’ by the ghost of a dead friend.
What would you do if a fortune teller had been right on the money six days stright; would you bet everything on the seventh days prediction… even the life of your new wife?
This is more of a tagline than a logline. A logline has a clear protagonist, antagonist, goal and stakes. Whilst this is an interesting concept and reminds me of a Derren Brown special called The System.
This is more of a tagline than a logline.
A logline has a clear protagonist, antagonist, goal and stakes. Whilst this is an interesting concept and reminds me of a Derren Brown special called The System.
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