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Posted: September 28, 2015In: Thriller

?An art forgery investigator deciphers location of stolen diamonds using her brother’s diary that mysteriously appears at her doorstep. She embarks on a hunt for the treasure finding her family lost decades ago and the truth about her father who masterminded an international heist.?

Added an answer on September 28, 2015 at 11:31 am

Sounds intriguing. I'd recommend streamlining it so it's a little less complicated. The logline is getting lost in the detail of the story.

Sounds intriguing. I’d recommend streamlining it so it’s a little less complicated. The logline is getting lost in the detail of the story.

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Posted: September 27, 2015In: Thriller

A group of young activists abduct a senior politician and use a psychological mind game to extract a murder confession but he turns the game around, insisting he has proof that one of them is a government agent.

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Added an answer on September 28, 2015 at 12:17 am

Thanks, Karel. Much appreciated. "A group of young activists abduct a senior politician and use a psychological mind game to extract a murder confession as part of a clever scheme to extort millions but he turns the game around by convincing them that there's a traitor in their ranks and the proof iRead more

Thanks, Karel. Much appreciated.

“A group of young activists abduct a senior politician and use a psychological mind game to extract a murder confession as part of a clever scheme to extort millions but he turns the game around by convincing them that there’s a traitor in their ranks and the proof is in a security briefcase along with the millions in his safe deposit box”.

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