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After a mega storm a single mum rush home to find her teenage daughter missing and an escaped prisoner waiting. She must help him escape to find out what he has done with her daughter.
A single mum returns home to find her teenage daughter missing and an escaped prisoner waiting. She must him get to his pick up point o find out what he has done with her daughter.
A single mum returns home to find her teenage daughter missing and an escaped prisoner waiting. She must him get to his pick up point o find out what he has done with her daughter.
See lessWhen a distrusting security consultant finds a phone and inadvertently reads a text containing a random set of numbers, he must quickly uncover their meaning when he’s made a target by a mysterious group who seem to be able to predict his movements.
How does the consultant know that the the numbers aren't just random numbers, that they are meaningful and he ?must decrypt them??It seems to me that his being "distrusting"?may be ?necessary to the premise, but it is not a sufficient grounds for the audience to buy the premise.? He could be distrusRead more
How does the consultant know that the the numbers aren’t just random numbers, that they are meaningful and he ?must decrypt them?
?It seems to me that his being “distrusting”?may be ?necessary to the premise, but it is not a sufficient grounds for the audience to buy the premise.? He could be distrusting and wrong.? The audience needs to be given a logical, empirical reason to believe that his suspicion is warranted. Ditto the logline reader — well, this one.? What is the cause-and-effect relationship between the numbers and the attacks that gives the consultant probable cause to be believe they are linked?
See lessAfter the murder of her mother, an anti-socialite young girl must survive the trials of a ritualistic fraternity to vindicate the alleged killer…Her father!
Agreed with the above. I'd add that the MC description as "...young girl..." sounds generic and as a result doesn't add much to our understanding of the character perhaps either remove or change it. Secondly I think the cause and effect relationship between the murder and the need to vindicate is clRead more
Agreed with the above.
I’d add that the MC description as “…young girl…” sounds generic and as a result doesn’t add much to our understanding of the character perhaps either remove or change it.
Secondly I think the cause and effect relationship between the murder and the need to vindicate is clear but surviving the trials of a ritualistic fraternity is not clear, this seams like a separate element tacked on for effect more than a story need.
How will this bring the MC closer to achieving her goal?
Hope this helps.
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