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Years after her family is murdered by a vicious career criminal, a lonely young woman embarks on helping two London detectives catch a hooded vigilante, killing the men of the very same man who destroyed her life. But when the hood comes down, will they like what’s revealed?
Agreed with DPG and Kbfilmworks. Also if her family's murder is what motivates her to take action it is in essence her inciting incident, but as this is described to be in the past it may not work as well as it needs to. In other words the wounds of grief from her family's death have had time to heaRead more
Agreed with DPG and Kbfilmworks.
Also if her family’s murder is what motivates her to take action it is in essence her inciting incident, but as this is described to be in the past it may not work as well as it needs to.
In other words the wounds of grief from her family’s death have had time to heal and therefore the impact of the trauma is diluted. In addition to that, in a story the immediacy of the action the main character takes can add a sense of urgency, but if the inciting incident and her action are separated by a few years this effect is lost.
Point is why not kill her family at the start of the story and directly before she sets off on her journey?
See lessA suicidal teen gets abducted from her boring life and is forced to compete in the ninetieth Trials, a three-staged competition that rewards the victor a cognitive transplantation with a coldhearted AI.
I agree with previous comments
I agree with previous comments
See lessWhen a rambunctious young clubber wakes up bound and gagged in the trunk of a speeding car she must use her wits and the contents of her handbag to escape her mobile prison before she meets her unknown fate. (Short Film)
Agree with FFF.??Being bound and gagged implies serious jeopardy.? And I think it could be even shorter. When a rambunctious young clubber wakes up bound and gagged in the trunk of a speeding car she must use her wits and the contents of her handbag to escape. (30 words)
Agree with FFF.??Being bound and gagged implies serious jeopardy.? And I think it could be even shorter.
When a rambunctious young clubber wakes up bound and gagged in the trunk of a speeding car she must use her wits and the contents of her handbag to escape.
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