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A powerful, critically acclaimed director pushes a naive, up-and-coming actor into the realm of psychosis, all for the sake of the character.
From the logline it seems the director is the lead character, the one with the goal and moving the story forwards. If so, why do we want the director to succeed? What is our motivation to like the lead character.
From the logline it seems the director is the lead character, the one with the goal and moving the story forwards. If so, why do we want the director to succeed? What is our motivation to like the lead character.
See lessWhen a doctor learns he has a kill-mate, a stranger that will be triggered to kill him if they cross paths, he must plot their murder, or risk a deadly encounter.
I like the twist ending if the MC finds out he was the kill mate for the other person all along it would add a sens of irony that would elevate the concept as a whole. Having them both as two Jo Shmoe's ala' Walter White could work, but making the target a big rich person and the MC a poor person prRead more
I like the twist ending if the MC finds out he was the kill mate for the other person all along it would add a sens of irony that would elevate the concept as a whole.
Having them both as two Jo Shmoe’s ala’ Walter White could work, but making the target a big rich person and the MC a poor person provides the MC with greater obstacles on his way to get to his “kill-mate”. So for the sake of your plot it may be better to place them at different ends of the socioeconomic scale.
See lessA sadistic killer lures young girls into his trap when they log on a mega church’s good samaritan app. A small town deputy must face his own dark past in order to stop the killer before he strikes again.
You could potentially do away with "good samaritan" It's a bit of a stopper, I was wondering what that might entail when really I need to be thinking about what your story is about. perhaps "Mega-churche's app" would suffice.
You could potentially do away with “good samaritan” It’s a bit of a stopper, I was wondering what that might entail when really I need to be thinking about what your story is about. perhaps “Mega-churche’s app” would suffice.
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