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When a disguised terrorist on a mission in his country sets him up in a train bomb attack, a dropout battles to evacuate panicking passengers who will be killed in his name.
The dropout is a character discription that isn't that specific. ?So try for something else. ?In a previous version, I think the terrorist was the teacher/professor. ?So rather than say how he left study, perhaps just ex-student. ?Does it even progress the story? "discovering a bomb on a train and rRead more
The dropout is a character discription that isn’t that specific. ?So try for something else. ?In a previous version, I think the terrorist was the teacher/professor. ?So rather than say how he left study, perhaps just ex-student. ?Does it even progress the story?
“discovering a bomb on a train and realising he has been framed as the bomber by his sleeper cell terrorist ex-professor. A (description ) must try and evacuate passenger before it explodes saving the people and his reputation”
The last bit may not be needed. ?But this is first draft attempt.
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Hello, ? ?I don get it... What murder, what victim?
Hello, ? ?I don get it… What murder, what victim?
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What about this? When his mentor set's him up with a bomb in a train terror attack, a naive young man, while being accused of terrorism must evacuate passengers which will be killed in his name
What about this?
When his mentor set’s him up with a bomb in a train terror attack, a naive young man, while being accused of terrorism must evacuate passengers which will be killed in his name
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