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  1. Posted: June 5, 2016In: Thriller

    When a flippant prankster is ripped off by crazy scammer he seeks compensation but inadvertently starts a relationship with the scammer?s even crazier assistant.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on June 7, 2016 at 4:07 pm

    As DPG said, it's a dangerous proposition, for un produced writers,?to steer away from the path of convention and 2 goals in the one script is doing just that. Secondly, a femme fatal is an arch type unique to the film noir genre, literally?including such a description in the logline is not recommenRead more

    As DPG said, it’s a dangerous proposition, for un produced writers,?to steer away from the path of convention and 2 goals in the one script is doing just that.

    Secondly, a femme fatal is an arch type unique to the film noir genre, literally?including such a description in the logline is not recommended.

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  2. Posted: December 2, 2015In: Thriller

    When Air Force One and a large passenger plane’s engines fail, the hacker responsible informs one of the secret service agents that he has two hours before each plane crashes to either assassinate the President or let his wife and child die on the other plane.

    DylanK Logliner
    Added an answer on June 6, 2016 at 3:31 pm

    I see a problem with the core concept. ?If the hacker can make the engines of Air Force One?fail, why doesn't he just crash the plane? ?Why bother with the secret service agent at all. I'm sure you'll deal with this in the actual script, but it was my first thought when I read the log line. So maybeRead more

    I see a problem with the core concept. ?If the hacker can make the engines of Air Force One?fail, why doesn’t he just crash the plane? ?Why bother with the secret service agent at all.

    I’m sure you’ll deal with this in the actual script, but it was my first thought when I read the log line.

    So maybe take the part about the engine failing out. ?Because all that matters is that a secret service agent has credible evidence that his wife and child are about to be murdered unless he kills the president first. ?Trouble is, he’s currently midair on Airforce one.

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  3. Posted: June 2, 2016In: Thriller

    A web of tragic events unfold when a love-starved atomic scientist allows herself to be seduced by a personable but moody lesbian teen whom she suspects of being a spy.

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    Added an answer on June 6, 2016 at 3:02 pm

    Is this film really about the danger?being seduced by?a spy puts you in? ?Or is it about the emotional toll of betrayal? ?If it's about a spy, then it's a Thriller. ?If it's about the emotional toll, then Drama. As a Thriller you definitely need to focus on the dangerous situation the scientist findRead more

    Is this film really about the danger?being seduced by?a spy puts you in? ?Or is it about the emotional toll of betrayal? ?If it’s about a spy, then it’s a Thriller. ?If it’s about the emotional toll, then Drama.

    As a Thriller you definitely need to focus on the dangerous situation the scientist finds herself in and downplay the emotional state of the characters.

    If it’s a drama you do the reverse.

    So which is this? ?Is it a story about espionage that happens to have a lesbian love affair in it?
    Or is it a story of betrayal and lost love that happens to include spies?

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