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When she visits her future in-laws’ ranch in southern Texas, a headstrong city girl tries to save two illegal immigrant children when she discovers the ranch manager is using illegal immigrants for fertilizer.
A little cleanup for redundancy and marketability: “When visiting future in-laws on a south Texas ranch, a headstrong woman must rescue two undocumented noncitizen children when she discovers the rancher is using migrant workers as fertilizer” This logline is getting better, keep going!
A little cleanup for redundancy and marketability:
“When visiting future in-laws on a south Texas ranch, a headstrong woman must rescue two undocumented noncitizen children when she discovers the rancher is using migrant workers as fertilizer”
This logline is getting better, keep going!
See lessBelieving that creatively explosive social interactions will cure his anxiety disorder, a man hurtles toward a brighter future in an extremely unsociable way.
Consider the following based on your synopsis: The suicide attempt due to his debilitating anxiety disorder is your protag’s major event aka call to action. Since I struggled to envision “explosive social interactions” I am leaning toward him becoming an anarchist or adopting anarchist behavior on hRead more
Consider the following based on your synopsis:
The suicide attempt due to his debilitating anxiety disorder is your protag’s major event aka call to action.
Since I struggled to envision “explosive social interactions” I am leaning toward him becoming an anarchist or adopting anarchist behavior on his journey to the cure.
You need opposition to him achieving his goal e.g.
A story: He must atone for his anarchist ways.
B Story: He must overcome a run-in with a hitman.
Many of your plot points can easily change his major event depending on where your story begins. Hope you find this constructive, take care.
See lessArmed with a fresh, distinctive way of looking at life, a young man finds himself helping an unconventional theatre group find their way into Hollywood in a uniquely criminal way, while hiding the fact that his time is running out.
"In order to jump-start his career, a struggling actor films him and his acting crew robbing a bank while in character."
“In order to jump-start his career, a struggling actor films him and his acting crew robbing a bank while in character.”
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