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  1. Posted: January 27, 2022In: Thriller

    A broken man learns of the time a famous thief will break into his home and auctions off the experience of a legal killing, secretly hoping it will be him waiting inside the right open window.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on January 28, 2022 at 1:10 am

    Interesting premise, leaning towards: “A dejected man turns to the dark web in order to auction the chance to help kill a thief when uncovering his home is being invaded” Took some liberties with auction plausibility via the dark web – you get the idea. Make this yours, keep going!

    Interesting premise, leaning towards:
    “A dejected man turns to the dark web in order to auction the chance to help kill a thief when uncovering his home is being invaded”

    Took some liberties with auction plausibility via the dark web – you get the idea.

    Make this yours, keep going!

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  2. Posted: December 5, 2021In: Thriller

    During the festive week of Christmas, a lonely student, recovering from a break up, is tormented by an unknown entity in red when he writes a spiteful letter to Santa.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on December 7, 2021 at 3:39 am

    Leaning towards: “A recently dumped student is tormented by an entity dressed in red when writing a spiteful letter to Santa.” OR “When getting dumped over the Christmas break, a spiteful student …” Opinion: Inject a healthy dose of intrigue to strengthen your thriller plot e.g., question his sanityRead more

    Leaning towards:
    “A recently dumped student is tormented by an entity dressed in red when writing a spiteful letter to Santa.”
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    “When getting dumped over the Christmas break, a spiteful student …”

    Opinion: Inject a healthy dose of intrigue to strengthen your thriller plot e.g., question his sanity.

    Make this yours, keep going!

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  3. Posted: November 14, 2021In: Thriller

    A retired cavalry soldier is forced to partner with a Cheyenne Indian to track down a serial killer who has kidnaped his daughter.

    Guy Man Logliner
    Added an answer on November 14, 2021 at 6:23 pm

    Maybe play up the idea that he's traumatized by something that the Native Americans did to him during the war so it contrasts with the idea that he has to team up with a Cheyenne Indian to save his daughter. Works for me, otherwise.

    Maybe play up the idea that he’s traumatized by something that the Native Americans did to him during the war so it contrasts with the idea that he has to team up with a Cheyenne Indian to save his daughter. Works for me, otherwise.

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