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A true-blue beat cop volunteers as Internal Affair?s snitch to root out an anonymous traitor when seized drugs surface in his cloistered community.
Agreed with, DPG and Gaerhart in the above comments. It's hard to understand the concept from the logline, and the premise seems generic. I suggest you use personal stakes, character flaws and unique obstacles to make the premise more interesting.
Agreed with, DPG and Gaerhart in the above comments.
See lessIt’s hard to understand the concept from the logline, and the premise seems generic. I suggest you use personal stakes, character flaws and unique obstacles to make the premise more interesting.
When a hunting trip in the Highlands of Iceland goes horribly wrong a disabled teenager must rely on her inner strength and local know-how to survive the merciless elements and save her mortaly wounded hunting guide father from the clutches of his deranged foreign client.
As above said this needs to be more specific. "Horribly wrong" could mean any number of things, try and flesh this out then fine tune it to 25-35 words as this is a long one.
As above said this needs to be more specific. “Horribly wrong” could mean any number of things, try and flesh this out then fine tune it to 25-35 words as this is a long one.
See lessLate afternoon August 18, 1966 South Vietnam – for three and a half hours, in the pouring rain, amid the mud and shattered trees of a rubber plantation called Long Tan, Major Harry Smith and his dispersed company of 108 young and mostly inexperienced Australian and New Zealand soldiers are fighting for their lives, holding off an overwhelming enemy force of 2,500 battle hardened Viet Cong and North Vietnamese soldiers.
Try something along the line of : When an overwhelming force of Veit Cong soldiers attack their position, an untried Major must motivate his inexperienced soldiers to turn the tide of the battle.
Try something along the line of : When an overwhelming force of Veit Cong soldiers attack their position, an untried Major must motivate his inexperienced soldiers to turn the tide of the battle.
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