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  1. Posted: October 1, 2016In: Thriller

    When the memories of his deceased family are stolen by a corrupt government official, a former extractor must obtain material from a highly secure cloud service for human memory to have them restored.

    Dkpough1 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on October 2, 2016 at 10:03 pm

    "After the memories of his wife and child are stolen by a power hungry government official, a washed up data smuggler must steal information from The Archive, a high security virtual reality cloud service used to backup and store memories too risky to store in the human mind, in order to get them baRead more

    “After the memories of his wife and child are stolen by a power hungry government official, a washed up data smuggler must steal information from The Archive, a high security virtual reality cloud service used to backup and store memories too risky to store in the human mind, in order to get them back.”
    This version is better. Here’s my new one:

    Example:?After his family’s memories are stolen by an ambitious government official, a data smuggler must hack into?a high security memory storage cloud to get them back.(29)

    What information does he have to steal? Wouldn’t he just be stealing back the memories? There may be a complication, such as they’re being held somewhere else, but the first plan of action would be to go the Archive and simply steal them back, correct? If not then it should be made clear what this other information has to do with retrieving the memories.

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  2. Posted: October 1, 2016In: Thriller

    A hacker must shut down the latest social media craze, The MindNet, after illegally connecting his mind with network?s creator and discovering a plan to use the MindNet as a means of population control.

    FFF Mentor
    Added an answer on October 2, 2016 at 6:51 pm

    I like the concept! I think the?problem is that we don't know what we will see in the movie... a physical heist at the MinNet server facility? people discussing hacking strategies on their keybords? I don't know if this is important at this stage. Anyway, I encourage you to write a 4 pages treatmentRead more

    I like the concept!

    I think the?problem is that we don’t know what we will see in the movie… a physical heist at the MinNet server facility? people discussing hacking strategies on their keybords? I don’t know if this is important at this stage.

    Anyway, I encourage you to write a 4 pages treatment to test the concept, then go back at the logline.

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  3. Posted: September 26, 2016In: Thriller

    ‘When a mentally ill patient refuses to leave his home, a probationary constable discovers her training could never prepare her for the deadly lesson she?s about to face.’

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on September 26, 2016 at 1:18 pm

    As Dkpough1 said.It's still not clear as to what the jeopardy is, what is at stake. ?What exactly is the "fatal ending" she is trying to prevent? ?A suicide, a homicide?

    As Dkpough1 said.

    It’s still not clear as to what the jeopardy is, what is at stake. ?What exactly is the “fatal ending” she is trying to prevent? ?A suicide, a homicide?

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